Glossary entry

Croatian term or phrase:

rekvijem za javu

English translation:

Requiem for a Soberness

Added to glossary by Nevenchi
Aug 18, 2009 21:37
14 yrs ago
Croatian term

rekvijem za javu

Croatian to English Art/Literary Poetry & Literature
Riječ je o naslovu priče. Pada mi na pamet requiem for reality, ali to mi zvuči nekako nemaštovito, prejednostavno...mislim da priča zaslužuje malo "jači" naslov, a mašta me ne služi dovoljno...
Proposed translations (English)
3 +4 Requiem for a Soberness
Change log

Aug 18, 2009 23:14: Veronica Prpic Uhing changed "Level" from "Non-PRO" to "PRO"

Discussion

bonafide1313 Aug 19, 2009:
jer si ti to tražila, eheheheh:))))... sretno za dobar naslov!
Nevenchi (asker) Aug 19, 2009:
da... u svakom slučaju, dali ste mi misliti :)
hvala svima!
bonafide1313 Aug 19, 2009:
da, sve zavisi o kakvoj javi je riječ, i čemu je suprotstavljena... nadam se da smo dali malo "mesa" za dobro rješenje:))...
Dubravka Hrastovec Aug 19, 2009:
Hm... Na prvu loptu, awakeness mi je budnost, budno stanje... Doduše moram priznati da sam se uvelike oslonila na postojeći film i traženje adekvatnog antonima... Nevenchi, sloboda izbora u Vašim je rukama. :-))
Nevenchi (asker) Aug 19, 2009:
awakeness moram priznati da mi se izraz awakeness sve više sviđa što ga više gledam...
bonafide1313 Aug 19, 2009:
nadam se da nije neka ovakova java:(( Naslov: Nedostižan europski san ili hrvatska tužna java?
( Unreachible European dream or sad Croatian reality? ) ...http://bib.irb.hr/prikazi-rad?&rad=284544
bonafide1313 Aug 18, 2009:
ne znam bi li što pomoglo recimo requiem for the waking hours, wakeness, awakeness ...http://freudslipsagain.blogspot.com/2007/06/sleeping-wakenes... requiem for the way things are... requiem for the name of the game...requiem for the real world...

Proposed translations

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Selected

Requiem for a Soberness

Hmmm, ovdje je autor parafrazirao naslov filma Requiem for a Dream, rekla bih. :-) Tim slijedom uporabila bih za javu 'soberness' jer može konotirati svašta:
http://www.thefreedictionary.com/Soberness
Upotreba neodređenog člana je namjerna, dakako.
Nije loše ni rješenje iz Bujasova rječnika: grim reality, sober reality.


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Note added at 10 hrs (2009-08-19 07:58:40 GMT)
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Dakako, Nevenchi, nadam se da prevodite priču i da ćete moći ocijeniti odgovara li moj prijedlog onome 'što je pisac htio reći'. ;-)
Note from asker:
Hvala Vam puno na ovom prijedlogu! Doista zvuči prikladno, u svakom slučaju prikladnije od mog prvobitnog rješenja (reality). I da, autor je uistinu parafrazirao Rekvijem za snove, iako priče baš i nemaju dodirnih točaka. U svakom slučaju, mislim da bi se Vaš prijedlog mogao dobro uklopiti. Pričekat ću još malo za slučaj da netko ponudi možda još maštovitije rješenje, no ovo mi zvuči baš super. Hvala najljepša :)
Peer comment(s):

agree bonafide1313 : ovo je jako lijepo rješenje ako je autor inspiriran rekvijemom za snove... jasno, treba znati o kakvoj je javi riječ, kako kažeš, nadamo se da nevenchi nije dobila samo natuknice:))
1 hr
Hvala, J.! Ja probala pronaći rješenje premda Poetry & Literature nije baš moje područje (nažalost) ...
agree Dinap : super Duby!
3 hrs
Hvala, M.!
agree ipv : jako, jako, jako mi se svidja ovaj prijevod
7 hrs
Hvala, shpeezza!
agree Marina Pjevalica
16 hrs
Hvala, Marina!
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer. Comment: "Još jednom, hvala :)"

Reference comments

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Reference:

sobernss

* "With all his pompous soberness, the worldly man is fundamentally frivolous; with all his maxims and cant estimations he is radically inane." — The Life of Reason
* "If I say that I have thought as many affectionate thoughts to you, while knitting it, as it contains stitches, I fancy I speak nothing but truth and soberness--for I love you now with the love I have returned on my heart from Abby, who no longer is in want of earthly friends." — The Life and Letters of Elizabeth Prentiss
* "I speak the words of truth and soberness--very sad soberness, too!" — At Last
* "He could not doubt her love of him; and although chafing at the idea that she swayed him absurdly--beyond the credible in his world of wag-tongues--he resumed his natural soberness, as a garment, not very uneasily fitting: whence it ensued--for so are we influenced by the garb we put on us--that his manly sentiment of revolt in being condemned to play second, was repressed by the refreshment breathed on him from her lofty character, the pure jewel proffered to his, inward ownership Adieu for the night,' he said, and she smiled." — Diana of the Crossways — Complete


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Note added at 1 day1 hr (2009-08-19 23:22:58 GMT) Post-grading
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Ova recenica mi je djelovala nekako najslicnija onome sto se trazi pa sam se odlucila za ovu referencu, nadam se da je pomoglo, a slazem se da je zanimljivo...

* "I speak the words of truth and soberness--very sad soberness, too!" — At Last
Note from asker:
Hvala na zanimljivim referencama!
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