Glossary entry

English term or phrase:

6000 ml tumescent solution were/was infiltrated per session.

English answer:

6000 ml tumescent solution was infiltrated per session.

Added to glossary by Michael Powers (PhD)
Jul 20, 2011 00:58
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English term

6000 ml tumescent solution were/was infiltrated per session.

English Art/Literary Linguistics English grammar
HI everybody,

6000 ml tumescent solution were/was infiltrated per session.

I would like to know if both verbs are possible (was/were) or which is grammatically correct
Thanks
SQ
Change log

Jul 20, 2011 01:23: mediamatrix (X) changed "Language pair" from "Spanish to English" to "English"

Jul 25, 2011 14:48: Michael Powers (PhD) Created KOG entry

Jul 25, 2011 14:49: Michael Powers (PhD) changed "Field" from "Medical" to "Art/Literary"

Discussion

Jim Tucker (X) Jul 20, 2011:
w/ Charles, +1 Both versions are usable.
Charles Davis Jul 20, 2011:
Well, for what's it's worth, I agree with all that. "Two bottles" is a different case from "two litres", which is different again from "three quarters". I think it is wrong to reject "was infiltrated" here. Really, questions of agreement like this depend on how the speaker is thinking about the subject, not on parsing the syntax as if it were Latin.

"Fewer than two inches shorter" is just wrong, in my book. You could construct a theoretical defence of it in special circumstances, but I can't believe anyone not corrupted by half-baked grammatical theory would actually say it. It's all the fault of people telling them that they can't say "less than two", they have to say "fewer than two". They take that lesson away and misapply it.
David Ronder Jul 20, 2011:
@Charles Yes, it's a grey area. I'd definitely say "Two bottles were drunk" (and they usually are when I'm around), but that's because we're talking about two physical objects, not just a measurement. We tend to use numerical measurements as singular quantifiers. I remember a whole discussion on the IoL forum about whether you should say "it's less than/fewer than two inches shorter". I think I managed to persuade most of them that "less than" was correct and "fewer than" hypercorrect, or wrong.

I don't think 'were' would be completely wrong in this context, I just think 'was' is common usage and sounds better.
Charles Davis Jul 20, 2011:
@David I think you have a point. I have been reconsidering this myself.
I would certainly say "Three quarters of the wine has been drunk". However, this is not a perfect analogy. "Three quarters" and "6000 ml" are different kinds of quantifying determiners; the former expresses a proportion of a singular noun and the latter a quantity. I would say "Two bottles of the wine were drunk". Would you say "was drunk"? What about "Two litres of the wine was drunk"? I think I would still say "were drunk", but I am less sure than with "Two bottles". Does this mean that "litres" is a quantifying determiner and "bottles" isn't? Or does it mean that a plural quantifying determiner of a singular noun may or may not call for a singular verb, depending on the type of determiner? Or am I simply losing my grip?
In the case of these 6000 ml of solution, I must honestly say that "was infiltrated" doesn't strike me as wrong, and though I don't want to decide grammatical questions by Google, I am struck by the fact that in expressions of this kind the verb is rather more often singular than plural (though it is very often plural). I think this is a more complicated question than it first appears.
David Ronder Jul 20, 2011:
6000 ml is a quantifying determiner of the singular noun 'solution' and so the verb should be singular.

Would you say, for example, "Three quarters of the wine has been drunk" or "have been drunk"? I hope the former, as the latter sounds odd in my view and would be a form of hypercorrection.
Charles Davis Jul 20, 2011:
@susiq "6000 ml tumescent solution" really means "6000 ml of tumescent solution", so the subject of the verb is "6000 ml", which is plural.

Responses

+4
27 mins
Selected

6000 ml tumescent solution was infiltrated per session.

the subject, "solution" is singular, hence the verb must be "was"

Mike



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Note added at 5 days (2011-07-25 14:48:36 GMT) Post-grading
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You are welcome.
Peer comment(s):

agree David Ronder : You got it
8 hrs
Thank you, David - Mike
agree Jim Tucker (X) : more likely
10 hrs
Thank you, Jim - Mike
agree Joshua Wolfe : See David Ronder's discussion, which I endorse.
11 hrs
Thank you, Joshua - Mike
agree Taberne
4 days
Thank you, Nieves - Mike
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer. Comment: "Thanks, yes, i agree that the focus is on the solution! thanks"
+3
33 mins

6000 ml tumescent solution were infiltrated per session.

The subject, "6000 ml (of something)" is plural, hence the verb must be "were".
Peer comment(s):

agree Martin Riordan
11 mins
agree Charles Davis : Undoubtedly plural; singular is wrong here
1 hr
agree David Hollywood : agree and there we go :)
1 hr
agree Jack Doughty
5 hrs
disagree Paul Lambert : 6000 ml is simply the measure. The solution itself is not countable.
6 hrs
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+4
31 mins

were infiltrated

in this case we're referring to the quantity so I would say "were"

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Note added at 34 mins (2011-07-20 01:32:36 GMT)
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as this very condensed language, the main emphasis is on the quantity and that's plural so "were" IMO

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Note added at 35 mins (2011-07-20 01:33:45 GMT)
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have to admit it's ambiguous but in the context I would go for the plural
Peer comment(s):

agree Yasutomo Kanazawa : Yes, just like "6000 were killed by the earthquake" where the real meaning is 6000 people, which would be plural and "were" would be used. Same logic.
2 hrs
thanks Yasutomo and we'll see how this one turns out :)
agree Shera Lyn Parpia
3 hrs
agree Thuy-PTT (X)
8 hrs
agree Phong Le
10 hrs
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